If I could look ahead,
See into the future,
Would I, peeping, see you?
Or would my stolen glance,
Find another’s eyes,
Gazing into mine?
© Copyright, September 2013, Jane Stansfeld
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Just remember….the Future is always D.O.A.!
Had a good laugh over that one!
JAne
Thank you Ian; I always enjoy your comments from down under.
Jane
I like it Jane, it is open to a lot of different interpretations depending on whether you are peeping beyond death or not.
Trust you, Wyon, to think that it might be peeping beyond the curtain of death. I hadn’t thought of this additional dimension, but now that you suggest it I rather like it.
Love
Jane
The peeper and the peepee 🙂
I love the peeper and peepee! This is worthy of another poem! Thank you for taking the time to visit. Jane
What a gift you possess. In just 6 lines you’ve made a profound statement.
My reply got posted in the wrong place. It was just to thank you for your visit and to wish you the best of days or is it already night down under? Jane.
He are down at the bottom of the world and hanging on tight so we don’t fall off. lol. Your night would be our day too.
My comment was not intended to be derogatory so I apologize if it came over thus. I agree that, naturally, our night is your day. On earth there truly is no up or down which is in itself
quite a conundrum.
Jane.
Oh my! I would never have thought such a thing. I love humour and my comments were in that respect. I’m sorry if I came across differently. It’s me who should apologize.